| Thesis #2 |
[Oct. 2nd, 2006|12:02 pm] |
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| | lethargic | ] | This is my current thesis, however, it will most probably end up highly revised.
While the Death Eaters are constant perpetrators of bigotry and genocide, they themselves suffer extreme persecution for their ideals and beliefs.
Comments and suggestions are welcome. |
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Aren't the death eaters the ones persecuting people?
Do you have enough evidence to be able to back this?
yes, but it will certainly take some work
I like the idea of seeing the world through a different point of view! nice job!
You don't really address what Rowling's position is on your issue. Maybe you should include what you belive she is commentating upon in your thesis.
I think it's an interesting idea but maybe include a connection to the real world through example
I like that you are taking a different perspective on Death Eaters, but because this has never been addressed in the books, you'll have a lot of work to do proving your point. good luck! | |